Where I want to live in 20 years

2021-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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The place where I want to live in 20 years is outside of Seoul Because when I get older I have to go to a big hospital and It should be a convenient place to live I want a place with good air and convenient trinsportatton

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Hello again [이름], Thank you for diligently doing your homework. Keep on practicing :)

~ Teacher Aki ^^

The place where I want to live in 20 years is outside of Seoul

>> 20 years from now, if there is a place I want to live in, that would be outside Seoul.
Because when I get older I have to go to a big hospital and It should be a convenient place to live

>> CORRECT

OR: Because when I get older and I need to go to a big hospital, It should be convenient for me.

I want a place with good air and convenient transportation

>> CORRECT

OR : I want to live in a place with good air and convenient transportation.

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