Where I want to visit
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If I have time and can afford to visit other countries, I would West Europe like Spain, Italy, UK. They have a lot of meaningful buildings that\'s been around for a thousands of years. A friend of mine said that it take much more time looking around those countries than other countries. I\'ve been to East Europe for 11 days, but if I visit there, I want to go longer.
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If I have time and can afford to visit other countries, I would West Europe like Spain, Italy, UK.
>> If I have time and can afford to visit other countries, I would like to go to The West Europe like Spain, Italy and UK.
They have a lot of meaningful buildings that\'s been around for a thousands of years.
>> CORRECT
A friend of mine said that it take much more time looking around those countries than other countries.
>> CORRECT
I\'ve been to East Europe for 11 days, but if I visit there, I want to go longer.
>> I\'ve been to Eastern Europe for 11 days, but if I visit there again, I want to stay longer.
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