Where I will live when I am old.
학생이 쓴 원문
First, when I am old, I want to live house where a lot of technology is applied. Because I can enjoy a luxurious life.
Second, when I am old, I want to live my grandmother\'s house. Because my grandmother\'s house is very wide.
Third, when I am old, I want to live in my house. Because there are memories of a long time together.
강사 첨삭
How nice! Me too, I want to live in a house where a lot of technology is applied so I could have much fun and use the technology to learn new things. Thanks for sharing [이름]! See you soon!
~T. Annie
First, when I am old, I want to live house where a lot of technology is applied. Because I can enjoy a luxurious life.
>>First, when I am old, I want to live in a house where a lot of technology is applied because I can enjoy a luxurious life.
Second, when I am old, I want to live my grandmother\'s house. Because my grandmother\'s house is very wide.
>>Second, when I am old, I want to live in my grandmother\'s house. because my grandmother\'s house is very wide.
Third, when I am old, I want to live in my house. Because there are memories of a long time together.
>>Third, when I am old, I want to live in my house because there are memories of a long time together.
>>First, when I am old, I want to live in a house where a lot of technology is applied because I can enjoy a luxurious life.
Second, when I am old, I want to live my grandmother\'s house. Because my grandmother\'s house is very wide.
>>Second, when I am old, I want to live in my grandmother\'s house. because my grandmother\'s house is very wide.
Third, when I am old, I want to live in my house. Because there are memories of a long time together.
>>Third, when I am old, I want to live in my house because there are memories of a long time together.
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