Where in The Pilippines you want to visit first?
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I have not gone to Philippines yet.
>> I haven\'t gone to The Philippines yet.
I really want to go someday,
>> I really want to go there someday.
If I will visit to Philippines, I want to go to Bohol,Sebu,Boracay. Of course Baguio.
>> If I will be able to visit Philippines, I want to go to Bohol, Cebu Boracay and of course in Baguio.
Because there are beautiful seas and wonderful natures.
>> Because there are beautiful seas and wonderful nature.
We want to healing without thinking about anything.
>> We want some healing without thinking about anything else.
And if I have a chance I would like to go to Baguio.
>> And if I will have a chance, I would love to go to Baguio.
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