Where in the world would you most like to go for your next vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to visit Central Asia or Africa some day. For Central Asia, it\'s because I\'m not familiar with that area compared to other regions. I want to see its exotic scenery and architectures. But honestly, I want Safari in Africa much more. However both are quite challenging for me because I have visited only one foreign country. So for the next vacation, I want to try closer countries like East Asia or Southeast Asia.
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I want to visit Central Asia or Africa some day.
>> Correct!
OR: I would like to visit Central Asia or Africa someday.
For Central Asia, it\'s because I\'m not familiar with that area compared to other regions.
>> Correct!
OR:I am unfamiliar with Central Asia in comparison to other regions.
I want to see its exotic scenery and architectures. But honestly, I want Safari in Africa much more.
>> Correct!
OR: I want to see its exotic landscapes and architecture. But, to be honest, I want to go on safari in Africa much more.
However both are quite challenging for me because I have visited only one foreign country.
>> Correct!
OR: However, both are difficult for me because I have only visited one foreign country.
So for the next vacation, I want to try closer countries like East Asia or Southeast Asia.
>> Correct!
OR: So for my next vacation, I\'d like to visit closer countries such as East Asia or Southeast Asia.
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