Where is a good place to have fun in your city or town? Describe the place ad explain why it is fun

2017-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I will talk about 'bad words latte'. There are two reasons why I choose the place. The first reason is that, they sell coffee and write some bad words on a cup of coffee. I think it is really unique and funny. The second reason is that, the mood is vintage, so I can feel like I'm in the past. As a result, I strongly recommend the cafe for these reasons.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing this good place in your city/country. I am just curious what they write on the cup of coffee. kkk

Anyway, have a good day. They said that the best way to start the day is with a \"cup\" of positivity.^^

~Kelly^^

I will talk about \'bad words latte\'.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> I would like to share about \"Bad Words Latte\".

There are two reasons why I choose the place.

>> Correct.
The first reason is that, they sell coffee and write some bad words on a cup of coffee.

>> Correct.

I think it is really unique and funny.

>> Correct.
The second reason is that, the mood is vintage, so I can feel like I\'m in the past.

>> Correct.
As a result, I strongly recommend the cafe for these reasons.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> In conclusion, I strongly recommend the caf

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