Where is best for you to stay over?

2021-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

학생이 쓴 원문

The best place for me to stay over is my house. When I stay at home, I feel comfortable. I love my house because there is calm and sunny. So I can concentrate on my writing and reading at home. When I go on a trip or visit relative\'s houses, I don\'t care staying over of the places. I am not a bitter personality. Wherever I go, I can adjust very well. The space is an important for the quality of human life. As I got older, I realized it.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thank you for today\'s homework!
Have a nice day and talk to you later!
Teacher Elly.
Where is best for you to stay over?
The best place for me to stay over is my house.
>>The best place for me to stay over is at my house.
When I stay at home, I feel comfortable.
CORRECT!
or>>When I am at home, I am very comfortable.
I love my house because there is calm and sunny.
>>I love my house because it is calm and sunny.
So I can concentrate on my writing and reading at home.
>>So I can concentrate when I am writing and reading at home.
When I go on a trip or visit relative\'s houses, I don\'t care staying over of the places.
>>When I go on a trip or visit a relative\'s house, I don\'t mind staying over at their place.
I am not a bitter personality.
>>I do not have a bitter personality.
Wherever I go, I can adjust very well.
CORRECT!
or>>Wherever I go, it\'s easy for me to adjust really well.
The space is an important for the quality of human life.
>>Having one\'s own space is important to experience a quality human life.
As I got older, I realized it.
>>As I got older, I began to realize this.

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