Where is it best to stay overnight in your country?
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There are two places that I would recommend foreigners to stay overnight in Korea. The place is Gangnam area in Seoul that is center of the city with lots of entertainment to enjoy. The other place would be a two called Haeundae in Busan that is located in southern part of Korea where there is a great ocean so you can enjoy various water activities especially in summer.
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There are two places that I would recommend foreigners to stay overnight in Korea.
>>There are two places that I would recommend for foreigners to stay overnight in Korea.
The place is Gangnam area in Seoul that is center of the city with lots of entertainment to enjoy.
>> The place is Gangnam area in Seoul. It is center of the city with lots of entertainment to enjoy
The other place would be a two called Haeundae in Busan that is located in southern part of Korea where there is a great ocean so you can enjoy various water activities especially in summer.
>> The other place would be a two called Haeundae, in Busan. It is located in the Southern part of Korea, where there is a great ocean where you can enjoy various water activities especially in summer.
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