Where is the best place for sightseeing: in the countryside surrounded by nature or the big city lan
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These days, I prefer travel to nature than big city.
If I go to Gangnam or other big cities on weekends or holidays, I feel like crowded and stuffy.
These days, everyone always use their iPads and cell phones, so I think relaxing in nature during the holidays is a necessary.
And seeing nature is good to the eyes.
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Thank you for this, Ms. [Name]. Have a great afternoon!
These days, I prefer travel to nature than big city.
>>> These days, I prefer to travel to nature than in big city.
>>> OR: These days, I prefer traveling to nature than a big city.
If I go to Gangnam or other big cities on weekends or holidays, I feel like crowded and stuffy.
>>> If I go to Gangnam or other big cities on weekends or holidays, I feel it\'s too crowded and stuffy.
These days, everyone always use their iPads and cell phones, so I think relaxing in nature during the holidays is a necessary.
These days, everyone always use their iPads and cell phones, so I think relaxing in nature during the holidays is a necessary.
>>> These days, everyone always use their iPads and cell phones, so I think relaxing in nature during the holidays is a necessity.
>>> OR: These days, everyone always use their iPads and cell phones, so I think relaxing in nature during the holidays is necessary.
And seeing nature is good to the eyes.
And seeing nature is good to the eyes.
>>> Moreover, seeing nature is good to the eyes.
>>> OR: In addition, seeing nature is good to the eyes.
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