Where is the best place to go shopping in your area?
학생이 쓴 원문
The best place is near to my house, discount shop building.
There sales a lot of clothes and shoes which trend last year.
The cost is very reasonable ,too.
Although there is such a shop building, I usually use to shopping on website.
It is time to me very funny time.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. Well, shopping online is very convenient and you have a wide selection of items. In addition, they\'re relatively cheaper.
- T. Beth
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The best place is near to my house, discount shop building. >>> correct
There sales a lot of clothes and shoes which trend last year.
>>> They sell a lot of clothes and shoes there which were trendy the past year.
The cost is very reasonable ,too.
>>> OR: The price is also quite reasonable.
Although there is such a shop building, I usually use to shopping on website.
>>> OR: Although such shopping building exists, I usually do shopping on the website.
It is time to me very funny time.
>>> It is a fun time for me.
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