Where is the best place to have a picnic in Korea? Explain.
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I think a amusement park because amusement park is fun and many people like a roller coaster but I don\'t like amusement park because amusement park is take waiting a long time and I don\'t like roller coaster
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Where is the best place to have a picnic in Korea? Explain.
I think a amusement park because amusement park is fun and many people like a roller coaster but I don\'t like amusement park because amusement park is take waiting a long time and I don\'t like roller coaster
>> I think amusement parks are the best picnic places in Korea because they are fun and many people like riding roller coasters, but I don\'t like amusement parks because you have to queue for a long time plus I don\'t like roller coasters.
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