Where is the best place to rest in your house?
학생이 쓴 원문
My best place in house is my bedroom.
Beacause in my bedroom,
there is my soft and fluppy bed.
And are some toys in my bedroom.
And also there is cuttens too.
강사 첨삭
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See you tomorrow ^^
T. DON
Beacause in my bedroom,
there is my soft and fluppy bed.
And are some toys in my bedroom.
And also there is cuttens too.
>> The
best place to rest in our house is my bedroom because in my bedroom,
there is my soft and fluppy bed. And there are some toys in my bedroom.
And also there are cuttens too.
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