Where is the best place to see animals in your country? In the world?
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The best place to see animals in my country is the zoo. In my country, animals can be seen well in the mountains. So if we want to see animals, we go to the zoo. I think the reason why I can\'t see animals well in the mountains is because of the natural scenery.
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The best place to see animals in my country is the zoo. In my country, animals can be seen well in the mountains.
>>> CORRECT!
So if we want to see animals, we go to the zoo. I think the reason why I can\'t see animals well in the mountains is because of the natural scenery.
>>> CORRECT!
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