Where is the best place to shop in your city? How often do you go there?
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T.G.I.F. Sir [이름]!
At last! We reached the most awaited day.
How\'s the weather there?
It is raining in my city today. =c
Anyway, thank you for sending this in today.
I became more familiar about the shopping places in your country.
I suddenly want to go to Namdaemoon. Hihihihi.
I think If I will go to Korea, I should have a lot of pocket money.
I really like buying stuffs especially for my parents and nephews.
Do you have any plans to go shopping this weekend? Hihihihi.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
The most typical shopping places where I often go to are department stores, big discount stores, grocery stores, and premium outlets.
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I go there once in a while.
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The Korean discount stores such as E-Mart, Lotte Mart, Home Plus offer a better option in terms of price, quality, and varieties, so I often enjoy shopping there instead going to department stores where things are too expensive.
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>> OR: Korean discount stores such as E-Mart, Lotte Mart, Home Plus offer a better option in terms of price, quality, and varieties. So, I often enjoy shopping there instead going to department stores where things are too expensive.
There are also famous shopping streets in downtown areas like Myung-dong and Namdaemoon that are more attractive to tourists because of many small shops that carry various kinds of things like cosmetics, souvenirs, health food, etc.
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Many tourists from China and Japan opt to go to Shin-Ra or Lotte duty free shop because they are less expensive than their own countries and quality is the best.
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I personally like going to traditional street markets because I can actually see and feel how local people are living, although they do not have bright chandeliers or spot lights.
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Vendors look like my grandmother.
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