Where is the most amazing place you have been?
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to the devil\'s tears in a bali, Indonesia on my honeymoon.
The devil\'s tears is cliff on the sea.
You can see that the devil\'s tears eat waves and then spout waves.
It\'s very awesome.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!
I appreciate your time sharing your thoughts about the most amazing place you have been. Try to read more English materials and learn more new words to improve your English-speaking skills. You are doing well.
~Kelly^^
I went to the devil\'s tears in a bali, Indonesia on my honeymoon.
>> I went to the Devil\'s Tears in Bali, Indonesia on my honeymoon.
The devil\'s tears is cliff on the sea.
>> The Devil\'s Tears is a cliff on the sea.
You can see that the devil\'s tears eat waves and then spout waves.
>> Correct
It\'s very awesome.
>> Correct
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