Where is the nearest amusement park in your city?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Woongjin Play paly world is in our city. it is a building for Winter enjoyment.
All season(spring, summer, fall, winter) you can enjoy for winter plays. for example, the sky, the skate, the snow board and so on.
but I have been to there. because of expensive ticket for enterence. but if you come to here, I recommand here for you.
it will be a suprise experience in Korea.
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Hello there [이름]~
Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it very much.
Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it very much.
Here are your corrections:
Woongjin Play paly world is in our city.
>> You can go to Woonjin Play world in our city.
it is a building for Winter enjoyment.
>> It is a building to enjoy during winter.
>> You can play here in all seasons.
for example, the sky, the skate, the snow board and so on.
>> There are things to play such as the sky, the skate, the snow board and so on.
>> I have been there and the entrance ticket is very expensive.
but if you come to here, I recommand here for you.
>> But, if you come here, I recommend you to visit that place.
>> It will be a surprising experience in Korea.
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