Where is the nearest restaurant ?

2020-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Dear [Name], Thank you for your short question. But I want more questions, if you ask me with short sentence. I live in Incheon. Incheon is the second hobor city in Korea. My house was located in new city of Pupyon province of Incheon. Basically, New city have a lot of restaurants. for example, Korean food, Chinese food, Vietnam food, Western style food and so on. but, I think, Delivery food is nearest restaurant. if I call the restaurant and order some foods, within 30 minute, I can eat food in my house. So, my wife and my son want to have some food to eat, I order them right now. As you know, it is difficult to use restaurant due to Covid19. So, as a result, my nearest restaurant is a delivery food.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. You did great. It is much appreciated. What do you mean by more questions? - T. Jasper

Dear [Name],

Thank you for your short question.
But I want more questions, if you ask me with short sentence.

I live in Incheon. 
>> CORRECT

Incheon is the second hobor city in Korea. 
>> Incheon is second to Seoul, the main city of Korea. 

My house was located in new city of Pupyon province of Incheon.

>> My house is located in the new city of Pupyon province of Incheon.


Basically, New city have a lot of restaurants. for example, Korean food, Chinese food, Vietnam food, Western style food and so on.

>> Basically, new cities have a lot of restaurants such as Korean, Chinese, Vietnamese, and Western-style restaurants.


but, I think, Delivery food is nearest restaurant. if I call the restaurant and order some foods, within 30 minute, I can eat food in my house.

>> But, I think, delivery of food from the nearest restaurant is the best because I can order some food and after 30 minutes, I can eat it at home.


So, my wife and my son want to have some food to eat, I order them right now.

>> So, if my wife and my son want to eat, I can order them.


As you know, it is difficult to use restaurant due to Covid19.
So, as a result, my nearest restaurant is a delivery food.

>> As you know, it is difficult to dine in a restaurant due to Covid19 so as a result, people would choose to order and deliver the food.

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