Where is the worst smelling place you’ve been

2018-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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I do not like traveling a poor country, so I do not have any experience to be worst smelling place. I can say that the toilet which is in my previous home was the worst smelling place I have ever been to. Because there was not a modern toilet when I was growing up. We needed to pump up poop with special tools like a ladle. That's why there was a lot of flies and bugs inside the toilet and it was smelling. I do not want to think of the time that I used the toilet. My family even did not have clean bathroom, so we had to boil the water whenever we would like to take a shower. It is common life when my generation people was growing up.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]!

I can\'t also imagine life without a sanitary bathroom. We\'re lucky today that we don\'t experience going through that kind of situation. A million thanks for always taking time to answer your writing task. Have a great day!

~Teacher Eunice


I do not like traveling a poor country, so I do not have any experience to be worst smelling place.

>> I do not like traveling to a poor country, so I do not have any experiences being in the worst smelling place.
I can say that the toilet which is in my previous home was the worst smelling place I have ever been to.

>> I can say that the toilet which was in my previous home was the worst smelling place I have ever been to.

Because there was not a modern toilet when I was growing up.

>> Because there was no modern toilet when I was growing up.

We needed to pump up poop with special tools like a ladle. 

>> We needed to pump up the poop with some special tools like a ladle. 

That\'s why there was a lot of flies and bugs inside the toilet and it was smelling.

>> That\'s why there was a lot of flies and bugs inside the toilet and it was smelly.

I do not want to think of the time that I used the toilet.
>> I don\'t want to think of the time when I had to use that toilet.

My family even did not have clean bathroom, so we had to boil the water whenever we would like to take a shower.
>> My family didn\'t even have a clean bathroom, so we had to boil the water whenever we would like to take a shower.

It is common life when my generation people was growing up.

>> It is a common life when people in my generation was growing up.



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