Where is your collection?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I collected postcards of places I traveled.
After the traveling, with watching the postcards I used to remind of memories of my travel.
But nowdays I don\'t collect specific items.
Sometimes when I go to a museum or an exhibition I used to buy unigue mugs.
강사 첨삭
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Where is your collection?When I was young, I collected postcards of places I traveled.
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or>>When I was young, I have collections of postcards of the places I have traveled to.
After the traveling, with watching the postcards I used to remind of memories of my travel.
After the traveling, with watching the postcards I used to remind of memories of my travel.
>>After I stopped traveling, I\'ve been looking at the postcards and they reminded me of my memories from my travels.
But nowadays, I don\'t collect specific items.
But nowadays, I don\'t collect specific items.
CORRECT!
or>>But nowadays, I stopped collecting specific items.
Sometimes when I go to a museum or an exhibition I used to buy unigue mugs.
Sometimes when I go to a museum or an exhibition I used to buy unigue mugs.
>>Sometimes, when I go to a museum or an exhibition, I buy unique mugs.
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