Where is your favorite place in the world?
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My favorite place in the world is my house. It is because I think my house is more cozy, and peaceful than any other place. I can’t relax even though it is very good place when I’m not at home and I feel like I can’t wait to go back home. I’m sure there is something different about my house. I think of my house as a paradise.
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My favorite place in the world is my house. It is because I think my
house is more cozy, and peaceful than any other place. I can’t relax
even though it is very good place when I’m not at home and I feel like I
can’t wait to go back home. I’m sure there is something different about
my house. I think of my house as a paradise.
>> My favorite place in the world is my house. It is because I think my
house is more cozy and peaceful than any other place. I can’t relax
in a different place even though it is a very good one when I’m not at home and I feel like I
can’t wait to go back home. I’m sure there is something different about
my house. I think of my house as a paradise.
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