Where is your favorite place to read?
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Here are my corrections for you:
My room in my house is my favorite place to read.
>> CORRECT!
It is very silent since I\'m alone in this place, and I need a quiet place to concentrate on something.
>> CORRECT!
When I am in school, I can hear my friends talking with each other and my ear focuses on the conversation so I cannot do my work.
>> When I am in school, I can hear my friends talking with each other and my ears focuses on their conversation so I cannot do my work.
The library is also nice, but it is a place that we use together so it\'s uncomfortable sometimes.
>> CORRECT!
For these reasons, I prefer reading in my private place.
>> CORRECT!
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