Where is your favorite place to study? Decribe this place and say why it is a good place for you to

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I think that my favorite place to study is library.

>> I think that my favorite place to study is the library.

There are two reasons why I choose the place. 

>> Correct.

OR:

>> There are two reasons why I it is my favorite place.
The first reason is that I can study with my friends.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> The first reason is that I can study there with my friends.

So, if I have quetions, I can ask to my friedns and discuss about that with them.

>> So, if I have questions, I can ask and discuss them to my friends.
The second reason is that it makes me be passionate to study.

>> The second reason is that it makes me become passionate to study.

Since many people study at there, I can concentrate on studying harder.

>> Since many people study there, I can concentrate on studying harder.
In conclusion, I pursue library to study.

>> In conclusion, I pursue to study in the library.