Where is your favorite place to study? Describe this place and say why it is a good place for you to
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite place to study is at my home.I don't have any siblings.So,my house is so quite.I can concentrate in the nosiy place.But I can't hear any nosie vocie in my house.So, it is comfortable to study at my house.
<English Letter>
Dear [Name],
I am busy today.I should research about republic of South Africa.It is my school homework.I should make PPT and research about republic of South Africa.I think it is fun but I have no time.We have a lot of test next week.
강사 첨삭
Hi dear [이름],
How are you doing? I hope you are studying at your favorite place. ^^ Well, just received and checked your homework and I am very happy because you are always doing a great job. I just want you to continue practicing your English because you are almost there [이름].
Check the corrections that I made and I hope that you will practice more. You construct sentences very well however try to connect simple sentences to create more meaningful complex and compound sentences. Use conjunctions like (and, but, so, however, for) and others to connect two or more simple sentences.
Anyway, bye for now and take care always.
~~Teacher Liza
My favorite place to study is at my home.
>> My favorite place to study is at home.
>> OR: My favorite place to study is in my house.
I don\'t have any siblings.So,my house is so quite.
>> I don\'t have any siblings so my house is so quiet.
I can concentrate in the nosiy place.But I can\'t hear any nosie vocie in my house.So, it is comfortable to study at my house.
>> I can concentrate in a noisy place but I can\'t hear any noise in my house. So, it is comfortable to study at home.
>> OR: I can concentrate in a noisy place but I can\'t hear any other voices at home. Therefore, it is comfortable to study in my house.
<English Letter>Dear [Name],I am busy today.I should research about republic of South Africa.It is my school homework.I should make PPT and research about republic of South Africa.I think it is fun but I have no time.We have a lot of test next week.
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Dear [Name],
I am busy today because I need to make a research about the Republic of South Africa. It is actually my school homework. I should make a PPT and a research about it. I think it is fun to have a great time with you but I have no time because we have a lot of tests next week.
Your friend,
[이름]
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