Where is your favorite place you\'ve ever been?
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Absolutely anywhere when I traveled with my family is my favorite place. I still remember the very moment when my family went to the ocean. Even it was time to come back to home, I and my sister said \"No we\'re gonna hang out more\" Even if I\'m not good at swimming, I like into the ocean. And it\'s a Kkotji Beach. there\'s my favorite place.
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Amazing Thursday, Elic! Here\'s a quote for you ; Don’t study to earn, study to learn. What you learn today is what you will become tomorrow.
Absolutely anywhere when I traveled with my family is my favorite place.
>> Absolutely anywhere I travel with my family is my favorite place.
I still remember the very moment when my family went to the ocean.
>> CORRECT.
Even it was time to come back to home, I and my sister said \"No we\'re gonna hang out more\" Even if I\'m not good at swimming, I like into the ocean.
>> Even though it was time to come back home, I and my sister said, \"No, we\'re going to hang out more.\" Even if I\'m not good at swimming, I like swimming in the ocean.
And it\'s a Kkotji Beach. there\'s my favorite place.
>> Kkotji beach is my favorite place.
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