Where is your favorite restaurant? Why?
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My favorite food is shish kebab.
It is in my hometown in china. Actually, it is xinjiang Uygur Ethnic food, but it also very famous in my hometown.
In Korea, here are so many chinese people from my hometown, and they also bought shish kebab to Korea. Thus, I can eat it in Korea, however it is more expensive than china, so I did not eat it very often.
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Where is your favorite restaurant? Why?
My favorite food is shish kebab.
>>CORRECT!
It is in my hometown in china.
>>It is in my hometown in China.
Actually, it is Xinjiang Uygur Ethnic food, but it also very famous in my hometown.
>>In fact, it is Xinjang Uygur ethnic food, but it is also very famous in my hometown.
In Korea, here are so many chinese people from my hometown, and they also bought shish kebab to Korea.
>>There are many Chinese people from my hometown in Korea, and they also buy shish kebab.
Thus, I can eat it in Korea, however it is more expensive than china, so I did not eat it very often.
>>Thus, I can eat it here in Korea, however it is more expensive than in China, so I don\'t buy it very often.
Thank you^^
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