where is your hometown? Is your hometown famous for anything?

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My hometown is Pohang.

>>CORRECT!

>>My hometown is called Pohang.

I live in Daegu now.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I am now living in Daegu.

Pohang is not far from Deagu.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: Pohang is close to Daegu.

It takes for one hour.

>>It takes an one hour to get there.

Pohang has the East Sea.

>>The East Sea is located in Pohang. 

So Since I was young I often played at the beach with my younger brother.

>>Because of this, when I was young, I often played at the beach with my younger brother.

Pohang is the first place in Korea where the sun rises.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: Sunrise is early in Pohang compared to other places in Korea.

So on New Year\'s Day, many people go there to see the sunrise.

>>This is why, on New Year\'s Day, many people go there to see the sunrise.

>>OR: As a result, many people, including tourists, go there just to watch the first sunrise of the year.

Its name is Homigot.

>>It\'s name is Homigot.

>>OR: The name of the place is Homigot.
Also Pohang has the largest steel factory.

>>Also, Pohang has the largest steel factory.

>>OR: Pohang also has the largest steel factory. 

It\'s Pohang Iron & steel company.

>>It\'s Pohang Iron & Steel Company.

In fact, it once polluted the sea water.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: In fact, it once polluted the sea.

So I couldn\'t play in the sea.

>>As a result, I couldn\'t play on the beach nor swim in the sea.

But after trying to improve the environment, it is now clear.

>>After trying to improve the condition of the environment, it is now clean.