Where is your hometown? Is your hometown famous for anything?
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Hello [이름]! Thank you for telling me about your hometown. It must be exciting to live an a big city like Seoul. I\'m sure that there are many tourists everywhere. I enjoyed reading your wok. Check below for the corrections I made. Have a good day! ~T.Dee
I was born in Seoul.
>>CORRECT!
My hometown is famous for many things.
>>CORRECT!
Seoul is a capital city in Korea, especially, this city has lots of things to do for fun such as many parks, palaces, art-galleries, and museums.
>>Seoul is the capital city of Korea. This city has a lot of activities to do for fun and many places to visit such various parks, palaces, art-galleries, and museums.
All the time, I can enjoy these things.
>>I can enjoy these things at any time.
I like to live in Seoul.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: I really enjoy living in Seoul City.
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