Where is your hometown? Is your hometown famous for anything?
학생이 쓴 원문
My hometown is the country. It is placed between Busan metropolitan city and Daegu metropolitan city.
Due to the country, My hometown is famous for fruits. Honestly, I think that crops are more famous than fruits. But I want to tell about fruits. Because my friend\'s father is a strawberry farmer. Strawberry is one of the famous fruits in my hometown. I went to his farm to pick some strawberry with friend that I\'ve known from 14-years-old. And I\'ve experienced to see a my hometown strawberry in Seoul. I was surprised to see that.
I lived my hometown from 2007 to 2017. I moved about 13 times be reason of father\'s job when I was young. So my talking way is different with hometown\'s talking way. Many people who talk with me ask that where is your hometown. It is a little stress.
강사 첨삭
Hello Cathy! Thank you for telling me about your hometown. But, I feel sorry that you feel stressed about how different your way of talking is. Don\'t mind the others and just keep your originality. ~~T.Dee
>>My hometown is a countryside. It is located between Busan Metropolitan City and Daegu Metropolitan city.
Due to the country, My hometown is famous for fruits.
Due to the country, My hometown is famous for fruits.
>>Because it is a countryside, my hometown is famous for soome fruits.
Honestly, I think that crops are more famous than fruits. But I want to tell about fruits. Because my friend\'s father is a strawberry farmer.
>>Honestly, I think that crops are more famous than fruits. But, I want to talk about fruits because my friend\'s father is a strawberry farmer.
Strawberry is one of the famous fruits in my hometown. I went to his farm to pick some strawberry with friend that I\'ve known from 14-years-old.
>>Strawberry is one of the famous fruits in my hometown. I went to his farm to pick some strawberry with my friend whom I\'ve known since I was 14-years-old.
And I\'ve experienced to see a my hometown strawberry in Seoul. I was surprised to see that.
>> I\'ve experienced to see strawberries from my hometown in Seoul. I was surprised to see that.
I lived my hometown from 2007 to 2017. I moved about 13 times be reason of father\'s job when I was young.
>>I lived in my hometown from 2007 to 2017. I moved places for about 13 times when I was young because of father\'s job.
So my talking way is different with hometown\'s talking way. Many people who talk with me ask that where is your hometown. It is a little stress.
>>So, the way I talk is different from hometown\'s dialect. Many people ask me \"Where is your hometown?\" It is a little stressful for me.
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