Where\'s the best rural area in South Korea? Explain.
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I think the best rural area in South Korea is not in South Korea because South Korea in many apartments.
So the best rural area is not in South Korea.
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Where\'s the best rural area in South Korea? Explain.
I think the best rural area in South Korea is not in South Korea because South Korea in many apartments.
So the best rural area is not in South Korea.
>>> I think the best rural area can’t be found in South Korea because the country has become heavily urbanized, with many apartment buildings.
>>> OR: There are too many apartments in South Korea, so I don’t think any place here really counts as rural.
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