Where should I go if I visit your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I recommand Kyungbuk palace in Seoul. there are a lot of King\'s house of Chosun dynesty.
Chosun was a country building in 600 years ago.
King\'s palace is very beautiful place. so many foreigner visit there.
You can wear the King\'s clothes. it show a shape of dignity in Chosun dynesty.
Kyungbuk palace has a small lake besides King\'s house. it is very beautiful place especially night time.
With a lot of lamp and reflected picture on the water, you feel a something of your emotional heart.
If you accompany your girl friend.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. As always keep it up. You\'re doing great!
Here are your corrections:
I recommand Kyungbuk palace in Seoul.
>> I recommend you go to Kyungbuk palace in Seoul.
there are a lot of King\'s house of Chosun dynesty.
>> There are a lot of houses of the King from the Chosun dynasty.
>> Chosun was a country that was built 600 years ago.
>> The Kings\' palace is a very beautiful place so many foreigners visit there.
You can wear the King\'s clothes.
>> CORRECT
it show a shape of dignity in Chosun dynesty.
>> It shows the dignity of the Chosun Dynasty.
>> The Kyungbuk palace has a small lake beside the King\'s house.
it is very beautiful place especially night time.
>> It is a very beautiful place especially at night time.
>> With a lot of lamp and reflections on the water, you will feel something emotional in your heart.
>> It is better if you are with your girlfriend.
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