Where there is a will, there is a way
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I love the quote "Where there is a will, there is a way"
Thesedays, many people don't know what they really want to do and just follow others.
But this quote makes me an active person who drives ones life wonderful.
If I just tried to do everything like others, I would under stressed and not happy with my daylife.
I would concentrated on getting a good job which is famous big companies with lots of money and vyied to won the race. So I would spend my life just comparing others lives.
But, I've made [이름] life with my will and it leads to beautiful life.
When i was in University, I tried to go to China to study chinese.
To go to china, I worked an franchise icecream shop to earn money.
After working 1 year, I finally went to China.
After another 1 year, I helped Chinese who came to Korea for their performance, I was an translator. I was happy with that. Eventhough I didn't get a job which is realating in Chinese company, but I enjoy making friends with Chinese.
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Hi Ms. [이름]!
Thank you so much for doing your homework and for sharing me your thoughts about the quote. ^^
I admire your willingness and strong principle in life, keep that up. I hope you will be able to inspire a lot of your friends given that kind of attitude. I will see you in class and let\'s work hard to achieve our goals!
Teacher Kay ^.^
I love the quote \"Where there is a will, there is a way\"
>>I love the quote: \"When there is a will, there is a way.\" (Take note of the punctuation marks ^^)Thesedays, many people don\'t know what they really want to do and just follow others.>>Now a days, many people don\'t know what they really want to do and just follow others\' footsteps.
But this quote makes me an active person who drives ones life wonderful.>>But this quote makes me an active person who drives one\'s like wonderfully.If I just tried to do everything like others, I would under stressed and not happy with my daylife.
>>If I would just do everything like the others, I would be having a lot of stress and I won\'t be happy with my everyday life.I would concentrated on getting a good job which is famous big companies with lots of money and vyied to won the race.
>>I would concentrate on getting a good job in big companies who compensates lots of money and view to won the race.
So I would spend my life just comparing others lives.
>>So, I would just spend my life comparing it to others.But, I\'ve made [이름] life with my will and it leads to beautiful life.>>But, I\'ve made a [이름] life with willingness that leads to a beautiful life.When i was in University, I tried to go to China to study chinese.
>>When I was in a University, I tried going to Chinay to study Chinese.To go to china, I worked an franchise icecream shop to earn money.
>>In order to go to China, I have to work in a franchise Ice cream shop to earn money.After working 1 year, I finally went to China.
>>Correct!After another 1 year, I helped Chinese who came to Korea for their performance, I was an translator.
>>After another year, I was their transator, I helped Chinese people who visited Korea for a performance.
I was happy with that.
>>Correct!
Eventhough I didn\'t get a job which is realating in Chinese company, but I enjoy making friends with Chinese.
>>Even though I was not able to get a job which is related to a Chinese company, I still enjoyed making friends with Chinese people.
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