Where two places you would want to go on vacation?

2022-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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They are Japan and Canada. I\'ve want to go Japan and the price of Japan also decrease lately. The reason I want to go Canada is seeing Niagara Falls and there are many foreigners in Canada. So the treatment of foreigners are good from what I heard.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


They are Japan and Canada. 

>> CORRECT!

I\'ve want to go Japan and the price of Japan also decrease lately. 

>> I\'ve wanted to go to Japan and the price of going to Japan decreased lately. 

The reason I want to go Canada is seeing Niagara Falls and there are many foreigners in Canada. 

>> The reason I want to go to Canada is to see the Niagara Falls and there are many foreigners in Canada. 

So the treatment of foreigners are good from what I heard.

>> So the treatment of foreigners are good from what I heard.

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