Where two places you would want to go on vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Rachel!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
They are Japan and Canada.
>> CORRECT!
I\'ve want to go Japan and the price of Japan also decrease lately.
>> I\'ve wanted to go to Japan and the price of going to Japan decreased lately.
The reason I want to go Canada is seeing Niagara Falls and there are many foreigners in Canada.
>> The reason I want to go to Canada is to see the Niagara Falls and there are many foreigners in Canada.
So the treatment of foreigners are good from what I heard.
>> So the treatment of foreigners are good from what I heard.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.