Where will you do when you die?

How dare can I say about afterlife, only God knows, though I am an agnostic. However, I imagine this world, reasonably, but quite skeptically. Firstly, I do not believe heaven or hell. Every creature has uncountable knotted and twisted stories in their lives, and the standard of good or evil has subtly changed depending on era. Moreover, scientifically, our soul cannot exist without our body. Rationally, there is no option other than to think my existence will be disappearing when I lose all of my vitality. Maybe, I could not feel anything, even myself or emptiness, when I die. It seems that we can make additional stories after the ending of the fairy tale, but actually, there is nothing behind it. This thought makes me really sad. On the other hand, it whips me to keep fidelity of my life. I have only on chance to deserve it. It is so precious to waste with worries and sorrow. The problem is that I usually forget this value and slightly wear out it with laziness and negligence.

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Where will you do when you die?

How dare can I say about afterlife, only God knows, though I am an agnostic.

>>I wouldn’t dare say something about the afterlife, only God knows, becaue I am an agnostic.

However, I imagine this world, reasonably, but quite skeptically.

>>However, I have a reasonably good imagination about this world, but quite skeptically.

Firstly, I do not believe heaven or hell.

>>Firstly, I do not believe in heaven or in hell.

Every creature has uncountable knotted and twisted stories in their lives, and the standard of good or evil has subtly changed depending on era.

>>Every creature has an uncountable stories that are twisted about their lives, and the standard of good and evil has subtly changed, depending on the era.

Moreover, scientifically, our soul cannot exist without our body.

CORRECT!

or>>Scientifically speaking, our soul ceases to exist without a body.

Rationally, there is no option other than to think my existence will be disappearing when I lose all of my vitality.

>>Rationally, there is no option other than to think that my existence will cease once I lose my vitality.

Maybe, I could not feel anything, even myself or emptiness, when I die.

>>Maybe, I will not feel anything even a vacuum of emptiness, when I die.

It seems that we can make additional stories after the ending of the fairy tale, but actually, there is nothing behind it.

>>It may seem that we can add more stories after the ending of a fairy tale, but actually, there is nothing more to it.

This thought makes me really sad.

CORRECT!

or>>These train of thoughts actually sadden me a lot.

On the other hand, it whips me to keep fidelity of my life.

>>On the other hand, it keeps me stay faithful in life.

I have only on chance to deserve it.

>>I only deserve to have one chance to live.

It is so precious to waste with worries and sorrow.

>>It is so precious to waste this live with a lot of worries and sorrow.

The problem is that I usually forget this value and slightly wear out it with laziness and negligence.

>>The problem is that I usually forget its value and slightly waste it with laziness and neglect.