Where will you go when you die?
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Where will you go when you die?
I\'ve never thought about it in my life.
>>I\'ve never thought about this in my entire life.
Many people say that they go to heaven or hell after death,
>>Many people say that they will go to heaven or to hell after they die.
I do not believe in God and have never known or thought about the post-death world.
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or>>I do not believe in the existence of God and I have never known or thought about where will people go when they die.
I had no vague expectations for the future, nor much regret for my past.
>>I have vague expectations about the future, and I do not regret anything about my past.
I am only faithful to the daily present life I live now.
>>I am only faithful to the daily events in my present life that I am living now.
My favorite phrase is \"Live each day as if it\'s your last.\"
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or>>My favorite saying goes this way, \"Live each day as if it\'s your last.\"
I\'ve never thought about it as usual.
>>I\'ve never thought about it as a usual part of life.
Many people say they go to heaven or hell after death,
>>Many people say that they will go to heaven or to hell after they die.
I do not believe in God and I do not know or think about the world after death.
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or>>I have no faith in God and I do not know of any world where people go after death, nor do I have thoughts about these things.
I have no vague expectations in the future, nor have I greatly regretted my past.
>>I have no great expectations about the future, nor do I have any great regrets about my past.
I am only faithful to my present day-to-day life.
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or>>I can only be faithful to doing my daily routines in life.
My favorite text is \"Live each day as if it\'s your last.\"
>>My favorite quotation in life is, \"Live each day as if it\'s your last.\"
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