Where will you go when you die?

2020-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I\'ve never thought about it in my life. Many people say that they go to heaven or hell after death, I do not believe in God and have never known or thought about the post-death world. I had no vague expectations for the future, nor much regret for my past. I am only faithful to the daily present life I live now. My favorite phrase is \"Live each day as if it\'s your last.\" I\'ve never thought about it as usual. Many people say they go to heaven or hell after death, I do not believe in God and I do not know or think about the world after death. I have no vague expectations in the future, nor have I greatly regretted my past. I am only faithful to my present day-to-day life. My favorite text is \"Live each day as if it\'s your last.\"

강사 첨삭

Hello Jia,

I appreciate your daily homework!

Please keep up the good work!

Have a nice day then and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

Where will you go when you die?

I\'ve never thought about it in my life.

>>I\'ve never thought about this in my entire life.

Many people say that they go to heaven or hell after death,

>>Many people say that they will go to heaven or to hell after they die.

I do not believe in God and have never known or thought about the post-death world.

CORRECT!

or>>I do not believe in the existence of God and I have never known or thought about where will people go when they die.

I had no vague expectations for the future, nor much regret for my past.

>>I have vague expectations about the future, and I do not regret anything about my past.

I am only faithful to the daily present life I live now.

>>I am only faithful to the daily events in my present life that I am living now.

My favorite phrase is \"Live each day as if it\'s your last.\"

CORRECT!

or>>My favorite saying goes this way, \"Live each day as if it\'s your last.\"

I\'ve never thought about it as usual.

>>I\'ve never thought about it as a usual part of life.

Many people say they go to heaven or hell after death,

>>Many people say that they will go to heaven or to hell after they die.

I do not believe in God and I do not know or think about the world after death.

CORRECT!

or>>I have no faith in God and I do not know of any world where people go after death, nor do I have thoughts about these things.

I have no vague expectations in the future, nor have I greatly regretted my past.

>>I have no great expectations about the future, nor do I have any great regrets about my past.

I am only faithful to my present day-to-day life.

CORRECT!

or>>I can only be faithful to doing my daily routines in life.

My favorite text is \"Live each day as if it\'s your last.\"

>>My favorite quotation in life is, \"Live each day as if it\'s your last.\"

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