Where will you spent your first salary?

If I receive my first salary, I'll go to great restaurant with my family and I'll give presents to my family. Presents doesn't determine yet, I consider some candidate of present. I want to give hanbok, Korean traditional clothes. Hanbok's price depends on the material and design, but almost hanbok is expensive. I don't have hanbok, too. Recently many people wear hanbok in special occasion like wedding. Second candidate is suit. Although suit is necessary for formal occasion, my parents don't have. Because they didn't encounter formal occasion. Next candidate is trip ticket anywhere. My father can't far away from his place of work because of his job. Around I recive my salary, they may have retirement. Do I understand question correctly?

Hi [이름], This is a very candid one; I hope you can fulfill this dream. Great job. See you tomorrow, -- Connie --   If I receive my first salary, I'll go to great restaurant with my family and I'll give presents to my family. >> If I will receive my first salary, I’ll treat my family in a restaurant and give present t each one of them.  Presents doesn't determine yet, I consider some candidate of present. >> I don’t know what present will I give yet, but I have some in mind. I want to give hanbok, Korean traditional clothes. >> Correct Hanbok's price depends on the material and design, but almost hanbok is expensive. >>  Hanbok’s price depends on the materials used and the design, but most hanboks are expensive.  I don't have hanbok, too. >> Correct Recently many people wear hanbok in special occasion like wedding. >> Correct just put a comma after Recently, Second candidate is suit. >> Correct Although suit is necessary for formal occasion, my parents don't have. >> Although suit is necessary for formal occasion, my parents don’t have it.  Because they didn't encounter formal occasion. >> It is because they don’t go to formal occasions.  Next candidate is trip ticket anywhere. >> I also have in mind to buy a ticket for a trip to any place.  My father can't far away from his place of work because of his job. >> My father can’t go far from his workplace because of his job. Around I recive my salary, they may have retirement. >> If I receive my first salary, maybe they are already retired. Do I understand question correctly? >> Yes, [이름] and I like your answers.