Where would you like to go for an adventure; a jungle, a desert, a small island or a city?
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I\'d like to go to a small island for an adventure. A small island has limited stuffes, it must be fun. A small island has a forest and we could find a big egg or we could meet anoymous animals. We may try to find out some treasures or survive to get out of this. Any how it must be fun.
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I\'d like to go to a small island for an adventure. A small island has limited stuffes, it must be fun.
>> I\'d like to go to a small island for an adventure. A small island has limited stuff to do, so it must be fun.
A small island has a forest and we could find a big egg or we could meet anoymous animals.
>> A small island has a forest and where we could find a big egg or we could meet anonymous animals.
We may try to find out some treasures or survive to get out of this. Any how it must be fun.
>> We may try to find some treasures or survive to get out of the place. Anyhow, it must be fun.
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