Where would you like to go for your next trip? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to go to Paris, France.
because I watched drama \'Emily in Paris\' at before. It make attractive me.
In addition, I watched movie \' Midnight In Paris\' too. In this movie, you can see an atmospheric night street in Paris.
another place is Japan. Because I like the Japanese mood. and I want to go to the hot spring \'Ginzan Onsen\'.
Anyway, I want to go everywhere right now. It make me bored that I stay at home all day.
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Where would you like to go for your next trip? Why?
I want to go to Paris, France.
because I watched drama \'Emily in Paris\' at before.
because I watched drama \'Emily in Paris\' at before.
>>> I want to go to Paris, France because I watched the drama \'Emily in Paris\' and I want to see it.
It make attractive me.
>>> It looks very attractive for me.
In addition, I watched movie \' Midnight In Paris\' too.
>>> In addition, I also watched the movie \' Midnight In Paris\'.
In this movie, you can see an atmospheric night street in Paris.
>>> CORRECT
another place is Japan. Because I like the Japanese mood. and I want to go to the hot spring \'Ginzan Onsen\'.
>>> I also like to go to Japan because I like the Japanese mood and I want to go to \'Ginzan Onsen\' hot spring.
Anyway, I want to go everywhere right now.
>>> CORRECT
It make me bored that I stay at home all day.
>>> It makes me feel bored to just stay at home for the whole day.
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