Where would you like to go on vacation? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to go to Jeju Island during summer vacation. I want to go to Jeju Island, go to the sea, eat delicious food, and go to a valley. I want to go skiing during winter vacation. I go to ski resort every winter vacation since 2 years ago. Skiing is fun. I want to go on this winter vacation, too.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^^
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~ Teacher Tricia
I want to go to Jeju Island during summer vacation.
>>> CORRECT!
I want to go to Jeju Island, go to the sea, eat delicious food, and go to a valley.
>>> CORRECT!
I want to go skiing during winter vacation.
>>> CORRECT!
I go to ski resort every winter vacation since 2 years ago.
>>> I go skiing resorts every winter vacation since 2 years ago.
Skiing is fun.
>>> CORRECT!
I want to go on this winter vacation, too.
>>> CORRECT!
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