Where would you like to live in the future and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to live in Seoul in the future because the university I want to go to is Seoul National University and I have to live in Seoul to go to Seoul National University.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
That was quick! Although you have lots of homework, you found some time to do your English homework with me. Way to go!
-Rachel
I want to live in Seoul in the future because the university I want to go to is Seoul National University and I have to live in Seoul to go to Seoul National University.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
>> I want to live in Seoul in the future because I want to attend Seoul National University when I go to college, so I have to live there if I will enter that university.
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