Where would you like to travel?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'d like to travel in Portugal once again.
My family traveled there 5 years ago.
Specially the smal towns at the end of the Atlantic Ocean was impressive.
I have many good memories of Portuguese.
In addition, I would like to see old historial sites, catherdrals, natural scenery of the Atlantic Ocean and innocent people.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts today.
Have a nice day and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
Where would you like to travel?
I\'d like to travel in Portugal once again.
>>I\'d like to travel to Portugal once again.
My family traveled over there 5 years ago.
My family traveled over there 5 years ago.
CORRECT!
or>>My family went there for a visit 5 years ago.
Specially the smal towns at the end of the Atlantic Ocean was impressive.
Specially the smal towns at the end of the Atlantic Ocean was impressive.
>>The small towns at the end of the Atlantic Ocean were especially impressive.
I have many good memories of Portuguese.
I have many good memories of Portuguese.
>>I have many good memories of Portugal.
or>>I have many good memories about the Portuguese people.
In addition, I would like to see old historial sites, catherdrals, natural scenery of the Atlantic Ocean and innocent people.
In addition, I would like to see old historial sites, catherdrals, natural scenery of the Atlantic Ocean and innocent people.
>>In addition, I would like to see the old historical sites, cathedrals, and the natural scenic spots in the Atlantic Ocean, including the innocent people who live in that area.
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