Where would you like to travel when you get older?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I get older, I would like to travel to many places such as America, China and Japan. But, the place I really want to travel is America. The reason is that I have never been there and I want to visit the tourist attraction. If I could travel to America, I would like to eat famous foods, visit tourist attractions and do something special. I think America is better than to travel Japan or China because in America, I could use lots of English and improve my skill. So, when I get older, I would like to travel to America.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I appreciate you for submitting your homework to me.
I hope that you\'ll be able to travel to America in the future. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
But, the place I really want to travel is America.
>> But, the place I really want to travel to is America.
The reason is that I have never been there and I want to visit the tourist attraction.
>> CORRECT.
If I could travel to America, I would like to eat famous foods, visit tourist attractions and do something special.
>> CORRECT.
I think America is better than to travel Japan or China because in America, I could use lots of English and improve my skill.
>> I think it is better to travel to America than to Japan or China because I could use lots of English and improve my skill there.
So, when I get older, I would like to travel to America.
>> CORRECT.
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