Where would you want to go after the COVID pandemic?
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I want to go London after the Covid pandemic. Because London has many famous places like British museum, Big Ban, and Golden Bridge. Also, I want to go palace of England. So I want to go London after the Covid pandemic.
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Hello, [이름]!
Thanks for sending your homework! I corrected some of the places you\'ve mentioned. I gave you the correct names of those places. Catch you in class!
Cheers,
Jean~~
I want to go London after the Covid pandemic. Because London has many famous places like British museum, Big Ban, and Golden Bridge.
>> I want to go to London after the COVID pandemic because that city has many famous places, such as the British Museum, Big Ben, London Bridge, and Tower Bridge. [There\'s no Golden Bridge in London but there\'s one in California, USA. The famous bridges in London are London Bridge and Tower Bridge.]
Also, I want to go palace of England. So I want to go London after the Covid pandemic.
>> Also, I want to go to Buckingham Palace, Kensington Palace, and Windsor Castle. So I want to go to London after the COVID pandemic.
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