Where would your dream home be? What would it be like inside and out?
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I live in an apartment in Seoul now so I want to live in the quiet countryside.
I hope there is a field in front of my house so that I can farm as a hobby.
But convenience facilities like mart should be near home.
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I live in an apartment in Seoul now so I want to live in the quiet countryside.
>> CORRECT!
I hope there is a field in front of my house so that I can farm as a hobby.
>> I hope there is a field in front of my house so that I can do farming as a hobby
But convenience facilities like mart should be near home.
>>But convenience facilities like mart should be near my home.
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