Where would your ideal holiday destination be? You can spend as much money as you like!!

2016-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I would like to spend half of my vacation in Maldives and then move to European countries like France, Greece, Netherlands, Italy, etc. I like my vacation to be a mixture of both relaxing and exploring different cultures. Part of the day can be spent exploring, and the other part fully relaxing. I may spend a day relaxing, then spend a couple days exploring, then do some more relaxing. If I have enough money, I’d like to stay at a super luxurious hotel for a few days and then move to a small cozy cabin as well to enjoy nature and tranquility, escaping from the hustle and bustle of a big city. Going on cruises through the Caribbean would be wonderful. In the big ship, you can do whatever you want. You can go to a Casino, watch various performances at night, or just do nothing at all if you want to or go on interesting excursions in the different ports of call. However, above all, there is no place like home. When I go on a trip, I used to stay out of home for less than a week.

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Hello Sir [이름]! Happy Thursday. ^^ Thank you so much for your time. I hope that you can go to Maldives soon. It is because you deserve it. I also want to go there but it is very expensive. See you. Teacher Nina   I would like to spend half of my vacation in Maldives and then move to European countries like France, Greece, Netherlands, Italy, etc.  >> correct I like my vacation to be a mixture of both relaxing and exploring different cultures. >> correct Part of the day can be spent exploring, and the other part fully relaxing. >> correct I may spend a day relaxing, then spend a couple days exploring, then do some more relaxing. >> correct If I have enough money, I’d like to stay at a super luxurious hotel for a few days and then move to a small cozy cabin as well to enjoy nature and tranquility, escaping from the hustle and bustle of a big city. >> correct >> Better: If I have enough money, I’d like to stay at a super luxurious hotel for a few days and then move to a small cozy cabin as well to enjoy nature and tranquility, escaping from the hustle and bustle of the big city. Going on cruises through the Caribbean would be wonderful. In the big ship, you can do whatever you want. >> correct You can go to a Casino, watch various performances at night, or just do nothing at all if you want to or go on interesting excursions in the different ports of call. >> correct However, above all, there is no place like home. >> correct When I go on a trip, I used to stay out of home for less than a week. >> correct

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