Whether a big city is the best place for a child

>Some parents feel that a big city is the best place for a child to grow up. However I disagree with this. There are many reasons to support my opinions. First, I grew up in countryside, for example, and I have a great memory of enviorment and people. I knew all people lived near my house, we had a party every month. I felt a love of family and people. Second, I wanted children to see how beautiful is my country and breath a fresh air in there. After they grew up, they can live in a city and enjoy their culture. Therefore, I would recommend that at least after you are borned, just live in countyside a 10 years.

[이름], You have great ideas and you were able to deliver your answer logically. Your exposition is nice and that your answer is very appropriate. You just need to work more on your grammar and sentence construction.   XOXO, Jenny   Here are the corrections: >Some parents feel that a big city is the best place for a child to grow up. >> Correct.  However I disagree with this. >>Correct.  There are many reasons to support my opinions. >>I have many reasons to support my opinion.  First, I grew up in countryside, for example, and I have a great memory of enviorment and people. >> First, I grew up in countryside and I have a great memory of environment and people.  I knew all people lived near my house, we had a party every month. >> I knew all people who live near our house and we had a party every month. I felt a love of family and people. >>I felt the love of my family and the people. Second, I wanted children to see how beautiful is my country and breath a fresh air in there. >>Second, I want my children to see how beautiful the country side  is and be able to breathe fresh air. After they grew up, they can live in a city and enjoy their culture. >> When they grow up, they can live in the city and enjoy the culture. Therefore, I would recommend that at least after you are borned, just live in countyside a 10 years. >>Therefore, I would recommend that children should stay in the countryside for 10 years from the day they are born.