Which addictions are safer than others? Is it okay to be addicted to something like coffee?
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Good day Sir [이름]!
Thank you so much for sending this in.
You were able to express your ideas in a wonderful way.
I think addiction can lead to a bigger problem if not avoided.
We can talk more about this in class.
See you.
Teacher Nina
There are many different types of addictions.
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It ranges from everyday drugs like alcohol and cocaine to behaviors like gambling and sealing.
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Addiction is both psychological and behavioral.
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Addictions are characterized by craving, compulsion, an inability to stop using the drug and lifestyle dysfunction due to drug use.
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Behavioral addictions are those not involving a substance.
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This type of addiction can be an impulse control disorder.
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Behavioral addictions are controversial and many don\'t feel they meet the requirement of being an official addiction.
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When it comes to psychological addiction, it might be addiction to Alcohol, tobacco, heroin, cocaine, etc.
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The behavioral addiction is a special food, sex, pornography, playing video games, working, shopping or even exercising.
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Although whatever it is, it’s not good to do excessively even exercising, choosing less harmful addiction is exercising or drinking coffee.
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And marijuana is known to be safer than alcohol according to experts.
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