Which addictions are safer than others? Is it okay to be addicted to something like coffee?

2016-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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There are many different types of addictions. It ranges from everyday drugs like alcohol and cocaine to behaviors like gambling and sealing. Addiction is both psychological and behavioral. Addictions are characterized by craving, compulsion, an inability to stop using the drug and lifestyle dysfunction due to drug use. Behavioral addictions are those not involving a substance. This type of addiction can be an impulse control disorder. Behavioral addictions are controversial and many don't feel they meet the requirement of being an official addiction. When it comes to psychological addiction, it might be addiction to Alcohol, tobacco, heroin, cocaine, etc. The behavioral addiction is a special food, sex, pornography, playing video games, working, shopping or even exercising. Although whatever it is, it’s not good to do excessively even exercising, choosing less harmful addiction is exercising or drinking coffee. And marijuana is known to be safer than alcohol according to experts.

강사 첨삭

Good day Sir [이름]!

Thank you so much for sending this in.

You were able to express your ideas in a wonderful way.

I think addiction can lead to a bigger problem if not avoided.

We can talk more about this in class.
See you.
Teacher Nina


There are many different types of addictions.

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It ranges from everyday drugs like alcohol and cocaine to behaviors like gambling and sealing.

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Addiction is both psychological and behavioral.

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Addictions are characterized by craving, compulsion, an inability to stop using the drug and lifestyle dysfunction due to drug use.

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Behavioral addictions are those not involving a substance.

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This type of addiction can be an impulse control disorder.

>> correct

Behavioral addictions are controversial and many don\'t feel they meet the requirement of being an official addiction.

>> correct

When it comes to psychological addiction, it might be addiction to Alcohol, tobacco, heroin, cocaine, etc.

>> correct

The behavioral addiction is a special food, sex, pornography, playing video games, working, shopping or even exercising.

>> correct

Although whatever it is, it’s not good to do excessively even exercising, choosing less harmful addiction is exercising or drinking coffee.

>> correct

And marijuana is known to be safer than alcohol according to experts.

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