Which amang your habits bothers you?
학생이 쓴 원문
My habit that bothers me is the overeating after hard working.
I can\'t very often cintrol my appitite.
When I concentrate on reading and working, I hardly feel hungry.
However after hard working, I suddenly feel very hungry and eat quickly like pig.
Specially eat carbohydrate, like bread.
It\'s my the worst problem.
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Teacher Elly.
Which amang your habits bothers you?
My habit that bothers me is the overeating after hard working.
>>My habit that bothers me is overeating after a hard day\'s work.
I can\'t very often cintrol my appitite.
I can\'t very often cintrol my appitite.
>>I can\'t control my appetite very often.
When I concentrate on reading and working, I hardly feel hungry.
When I concentrate on reading and working, I hardly feel hungry.
>>When I concentrate either on working or reading, I hardly feel any hunger.
However after hard working, I suddenly feel very hungry and eat quickly like pig.
However after hard working, I suddenly feel very hungry and eat quickly like pig.
>>However, after working hard, I suddenly feel very hungry and I then eat quickly like a pig.
Specially eat carbohydrate, like bread.
Specially eat carbohydrate, like bread.
>>Especially, I eat lots of carbohydrates, like bread.
It\'s my the worst problem.
It\'s my the worst problem.
>>It\'s my worst problem.
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