Which among your goals have you already achieved?
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Hello Charley!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
When I began my job, I envied a japanese motor journalist who drove over 3,000 cars.
>> When I started my job, I envied a Japanese motor journalist who drove over 3,000 cars.
Now I drove over 3,500 cars.
>> Now, I have driven over 3,500 cars.
Of course I wrote articles about all that cars. So I can say I achieved one of my goals.
>> Of course, I wrote articles about all those cars, so I can say I achieved one of my goals.
Still, I really happy to meet new car.
>> Still, I\'m really happy to meet new cars.
Especially, at the era change timing automakers introduce quite a lot of advansed car. that is , it has cutting edge technology.
>> Especially in the era when automakers introduced quite a lot of advanced cars which has cutting-edge technology.
For example, acc, adaptive cruise contrloe is really helpful for your driving. and entertainment system is also very useful while driving.
>> For example, ACC or adaptive cruise control is really helpful for your driving and the entertainment system is also very useful while driving.
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