Which among your goals have you already achieved?
학생이 쓴 원문
I set a goals at the beginning of last year.
I wanted to get married and run a marathon, and I achieved those.
And this year, I\'m planning to have my baby and run a marathon again.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
It was great to hear from you! You expressed your goals clearly. I wish you the best!
Please check the corrections carefully. See you next time! :)
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I set a goals at the beginning of last year.
- I set goals at the beginning of last year.
I wanted to get married and run a marathon, and I achieved those.
- I wanted to get married and run a marathon, and I achieved both of those.
And this year, I\'m planning to have my baby and run a marathon again.
- This year, I am planning to have my baby and run a marathon again.
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