Which among your goals have you already achived?
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The goal that I achieved in recent years was joining the company.
>> The goal that I have achieved in recent years is joining a company.
After I graduated, I submitted many resume to many companies and I failed.
>> After I graduated, I submitted my resume to many companies and failed.
So when I got the email that I was accepted, I was so pleased with my parents.
>> So when I got the email that I was accepted, my parents and I were so pleased.
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